[Demonskid]

Everything that has been done was part of Pandora's dream. She wakes up to find herself back in her shop at the cash register waiting for customers.

-nods-

I'm all for a story rewrite. starting off with actual story with background info on the NPC's in the header, and the shop NPC's.

Don't delete existing NPCs, use them as side characters (Filler Characters) that aren't as important. Just give them a background re-write keeping certain aspects of them, like their personality and if possible their profession.

Don't make new NPC's for this reason or that. Use the ones you have if you need someone that's not a main character to do something. The one reason I can't seem to follow the stories and stuff is that NPC's are made then forgotten about.

Kaimid's Furball has gone missing. More than likely she ran away after the third catapult into the ceiling. Zeo, who had wanted to get some body art done, came looking for the tattoo artist. He tells Kaimid that he saw furball sitting on one of the chairs in the shop. Kaimid rushes back and finds his furry friend curled up and sleeping right where Zeo said she was. Zeo got a small discount off his new tattoo. A painfully small discount.

Rewrite the planets as well. Some of the races on those planets were supposed to be taken down anyway. Explain the countries and territories of the planets and with information of what race lives there and what they are like.

Quesaria, a beautiful planet full of forests and ruins. Crystals that radiate a strange energy cling to trees and rocks as if it were growing off of them. Home to the ever hunted Sinopa. If you have one as a pet, keep them away from radioactive chinchilla's, who seem to be their sworn enemy.

In the story part, have stuff in there that will lead up to the next event, and when the event happens add a summary like part. Like a NPC remembering what went on during the event, and have the event linked somewhere in the memories. Since Events are RP based and are in chapters, link each chapter to the memories of that section. That way for those who don't like reading RPs can still read what happened in the story.