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#2152
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Lawtan
Dragon Storm
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Originally Posted by AutobotDen
Would anyone like to help me make sure my story's actually readable and flows well? I'm going to be doing the first chapter as a comic, but the story itself is finished and has been looked over once already (By Tam, in fact. :3), and I'd like some feedback on it.
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I am not sure I'll have time this weekend, but I'll look over it as soon as I can either way.
Lawtan: A chaotic dragoness with issues.
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��s ofer�ode, �isses sw� m�g.
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Science, horror, folklore, and cuteness incoming!
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Posted 10-31-2014, 05:06 PM
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