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Originally Posted by AutobotDen View Post
Would anyone like to help me make sure my story's actually readable and flows well? I'm going to be doing the first chapter as a comic, but the story itself is finished and has been looked over once already (By Tam, in fact. :3), and I'd like some feedback on it.
If you don't have any takers, hit me up Monday. I've a really busy weekend and I know I won't get to it.

I've got my pink hair and I'm ready to go!
Old Posted 10-31-2014, 04:13 PM Reply With Quote