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#2148
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Den
Tattooed & foul-mouthed
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Would anyone like to help me make sure my story's actually readable and flows well? I'm going to be doing the first chapter as a comic, but the story itself is finished and has been looked over once already (By Tam, in fact. :3), and I'd like some feedback on it.
I use She/Her and They/Them pronouns.
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Posted 10-31-2014, 03:19 PM
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