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Originally Posted by ml1201

Oh! So you're the person who wrote it! XD I have a suggestion then if you want to try to keep the wording down so that people don't just go 'ugh, wall of text!' because I've had that problem on some sites when it came to running events/charities and I'd hate for someone to do that to your RP. :3 Make bullet points of all the important details for the world, then fill in some text to give it body and keep it a short but descriptive as possible. Then at the end you can add some 'flavor' information as I like to call it. It's basically what is considered trivia for that world. So that bit about them getting married, being ship captains, harbor masters, having computers and stuff can be considered trivia. This way they can read what's important as a must, and then read the rest when they feel like it to add more flavor to the RP. :3

(I honestly don't mind reading a lot of text like that, but for some reason black on white hurts my eyes when I try reading it, as does reading with my glasses on. And since I can't even see the screen without bringing my nose right up to it without my glasses it makes reading things problematic for me sadly ^^; )

By the way, are there themes to this site? :o Something with a darker tone so my eyes don't hate me? ^^;

Ah, I'm just the main contributor. Tam cleaned things up and wrote the notes on dens_tf_den. we converse back and forth over AIM/Pidgin, so things get a bit disorganized/ugly on the original articles...