[Quiet Man Cometh]

Not totally sure what to make of this poem. There are parts where I think I get what you mean and other parts where things feel obscure or just decorative, but I expect I just don't share enough of the right knowledge base to follow everything.

The first stanza sticks out to me though. One, it feels atypical of you, going by what I've read thus far, and I'm not sure if it really connects with the rest of the poem. At least, I'm not connecting it really. I'm not all that sure it needs to be there.


These lines are very cool by the way: :)

"And in the catacombs where intention was laid to rest"

"Every quantum resurrection leaves an infinity of corpses
so biology is not an ignorant synonym for God"