[Lawtan]

I would say don't be lenient - my education sucks, in truth - but also, that I can't correct everything at once, and as Espy could tell you, I have a strong personal inclination to "focus on only one thing" and simultaneously "do everything at once."

What is confusing to me is that I can't personally tell how the other posts are better.

I think I made a mistake with Kadia...I am not sure I can write her correctly, as of yet...and there is a great deal of my issues that come into writing her. She is supposed to be stronger than she is, but so far is coming across as an ant-like rebel crybaby.