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#920
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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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Originally Posted by Lawtan
Nope. Just super-dead-fuck-abnormally quick-venom
Kadia had Rurik keep Dante on his side, and opened the aid box inside of Rurik. Grapping one of Rurik’s syringe-pumps, and a relaxant, she administered that to Dante to reduce the convulsing. Now able to grab the bitten limbs, she wrapped chords around them, greatly reducing the bloodflow momentarily to those limbs. She could not flush such toxins out of Dante’s system, and he had went eerily still. With another syringe, she tried multiple antivenoms…to little effect. Limited, Kadia did the only thing possible. Cleaning the blood away, she tied Dante’s limb stiff, and injected the two now-empty syringe-pumps near the black-red swollen bite-marks on the leg. Pulling in reverse, despite being a near futile effort, she tried to draw the tainted blood. In coagulated clumps, it collected…
Dante was starting to grow cold and stiff. In a panic, Kadia, frantic to not let another person die…not again…withdrew the syringes, and plugged up Rurik’s defibrillator.
“Clear!” She cried, and 120 volts went into the drunkard. Nothing happened.
“Clear!” She tried again, “Please….Clear!”
Kadia was in tears, unable to help the guy who helped her, when Thomas stepped forward.
Critique?
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So, speaking as someone who's be defibrillated, that's not how it works. It's used to shock the heart back into a normal rhythm, not to restart one that has ceased beating entirely.
However, you CAN leave this in if she really wouldn't know that, and Thomas will explain to her why she's not doing Dante any good. :P
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 11-23-2013, 06:07 PM
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