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Default   #854   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Galla don't read this.



Anyway, that's more or less the sort of thing I mean when I talk about consequences in writing. Just cause it's in a Sci-Fi or Fantasy setting, doesn't mean realism doesn't apply. It's actually more important than in other genres, since you're already asking your audience to buy into a whole bunch of crazy hypotheticals (what if God was dead, and the barriers between Heaven and Hell were deteriorating, and humans had to become monsters in order to survive, etc?) you need to give the readers some kind of grounding, and you do that in the little things like starting an IV that they can relate to.

And, she's very lucky that Thomas thinks so robotically -- she's human, and hasn't actually abetted a true AI, so her only real offense is reacting the way she did, he doesn't have a legal mandate to eradicate her at the moment, though she's clearly made herself apparent as a danger to the mission, he won't tolerate any further disturbances from her. The kiss and plucky taunting he couldn't really care less about, in his mind it was just a tactically stupid thing to do, he's neurologically incapable of taking things personally. :P
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 11-22-2013, 03:35 PM Reply With Quote