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Default   #458   Lawtan Lawtan is offline
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On Dante's thing - I was actually referring to when Espy said he thought he heard something, but thought nothing of it.
I will edit the weapons stuff out a good bit. Also, missed getting rid of the adamantium thing, sorry (did nit have the time I wanted to revise it.
Umm...don't know what to do about the sneak up bit. She had a very unstable piece of epic-level tech that made her virtually undetectable for a short while. I need to write it better, but in part her knowledge of it failing on her also spurs her leap into the fray. She doesn't save the group - she joins them in the heat of battle. I do not know how yhis would ctoss a line.*shrugs*
I am trying to make her knowledgeable yet naive - a lack of experience on the human aspect of the world, yet awareness of the ways demons work.
And she curses in German. Verdammt!
Maybe I should just rewrite the thing and follow Quiet's lead.
Lawtan: A chaotic dragoness with issues.
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Old Posted 11-09-2013, 02:19 AM Reply With Quote