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Default   #28   Kenai Kenai is offline
Ho! Miscreant!
I don't mind the lack of capitals right now but in a role play? Well we'll see. If my example pasts your test that is.

A large crash could be heard from behind him. "WHAT NOW?!?" Gregory screamed as he spun on the balls of his feet. Before his eyes could focus on the world in front of him he felt a sudden pain in his face. Gregory found himself lying on the ground and looking up at a man. He could see clearly yet but the figure of the man wasn't someone large and intimidating but just another ordinary guy like himself.

"Ghe-" he coughed, "-get in line. You're probably only the third person to try and kill me today."

The man pulled out a gun. Gregory said his prayers. He heard the sound echo around the room and it was immediately followed by a mighty roar of some beast. With effort Gregory turned his head towards the monstrosity. The shape vaguely resembled a bear but without fur. Its skin looked like a mess of scar tissue and blisters. If the two men escaped this alive Gregory might have to thank him. Even...if he was just another hunter for the bounty on his head.

The fight between the gunner and the bear-like monstrocity. Continued only it looked like the man would run out of ammo before the bear would run out of blood. Gregory stood unsteadily on his feet but was recovering quicker now. "Let go!" he yelled to his rescuer. If there was one thing he seemed to be good at it was running away.
Old Posted 08-30-2013, 06:31 PM Reply With Quote