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Eboneye Eboneye is offline
Supernatural Abnormality
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Its ok no biggie. I know there were problems and expected some critiquing. Why would I stick it here if I didn't want constructive criticism. I remember its being so much better the it really was. lol.
Today I have read some of the chapters on the disc this time and figured I will not post the rest of it. As a 16 year old I had a idealized and as you said generic view and it just doesn't make for a good read. I'm happy my teacher gave me a A but I know my unfinished story is completely flawed. It was interesting to see at least one persons point of view about it thou. :)
Old Posted 06-05-2013, 02:13 PM Reply With Quote