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#4
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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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I know the feeling, I wrote a entire novel when I was 15 and was so proud of it... I only keep the manuscript around now to remind myself how much I've improved since then.
And yeah, didn't mean to go overboard critiquing 16-year-old-you's rendition of swordsmanship, I just like fight scenes to be realistic. :P
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 06-05-2013, 12:14 PM
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