[Umaeril]

Personally I like the first one best, it's sharper. But I can see the appeal of a whiter one. If you like this avatar you could get the items and then do both if you want. I can see where this could be tweaked more, however, I really did not want to do more unless you liked them. And on the other hand, perhaps they are fine the way they are. But I think these are good bases or "jumping off points" for you to go on and create exactly what you want.