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Gallagher · Posted 02-11-2013, 08:25 PM

I'm honestly not a fan of matching lines right next to each other with themes like this. It distracts from the feeling. Most rhyme does, really, but it should at least be separated more. Maybe try ABA CDC? Or something, I don't know.

The trouble with poems is that they have to be really spectacular to stand out.

		#4942	Gallagher It Won't Stop
I'm honestly not a fan of matching lines right next to each other with themes like this. It distracts from the feeling. Most rhyme does, really, but it should at least be separated more. Maybe try ABA CDC? Or something, I don't know. The trouble with poems is that they have to be really spectacular to stand out.
	Posted 02-11-2013, 08:25 PM