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Gallagher · Posted 02-11-2013, 08:04 PM

Mm... The theme is good, the rhyme scheme a bit predictable and unfitting with it though, and using the same words for your Bs is a little cheap with one that short.

Gallagher It Won't Stop			#4931
	Mm... The theme is good, the rhyme scheme a bit predictable and unfitting with it though, and using the same words for your Bs is a little cheap with one that short.
		Posted 02-11-2013, 08:04 PM