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Default Epic Story (and epic issues with it)   #1  
(Tentatively rated [M] for language)

Welp, I'm trying my hand at writing again. Over the last year or so I've taken several of my smaller story ideas and mashed them all up together in my mind to fit into one neatly mashed-together plot. When they're finally excreted into intelligible sentences, they should (theoretically) form a glorious, epic tale. That's the goal anyway. Actually getting around to writing everything out is going to be an amazing challenge. This little piece for instance:




Took about a week to eke out. It may seem ambitious, but I'm aiming to get the finished product published, so I could really use whatever help anyone's willing to offer. What I've always been worried about (in everything, but in this piece as an example) is exposition, sentence structure, and pacing. My biggest issue is that I'll stare at a sentence or a word for long periods of time and think too deeply about what should be there, rather than just puking out words and then going back to edit later. I'm not sure how to overcome this. Advice would be useful and appreciated. Or painful critiquing. Or words of hope and encouragement. This is an important project for me, so really just anybody giving any kind of a shit would be a huge help.

Thanks!
Last edited by CupcakeDolly; 11-04-2012 at 02:10 AM.
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