[whitexsuicide]

well First off, she writes it as if the teen is writing it, which gets annoying... but it's not that bad.
Second off, The main character likes this one fae guy but of course they don't start dating until the third book. So you sit there yelling at the main character, because she likes him so much and he is trying so hard to be with her and she just sits there worrying that he is no good for her and that why would he ever like her. WTF?
Third off and the most annoying part, is that she feels the need to repeat EVERYTHING that went on in past books. I don't need to hear what the fae looks like for the third time, because you think i'm not gonna remember that he looks fae and he is hot and has long blond hair.... Sad thing is that isn't the only thing she feels the need to repeat. It's really annoying, expressively since there is no need or reason for it. The books only came out a few months apart from each other, so it's not like it was about two years in between books.