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Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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I don't really think there's an issue with depth, it's the meaning you have behind it so far that I like. I just think the way it was written could be better. Poetry doesn't need fancy language or anything, but it looks like it could use some polish.
Tea?
Posted 10-08-2012, 10:22 PM