[Soul Dreamer]

I'm not going to argue, my writing needs work. I was not myself yesterday due to multiple reasons and felt highly attacked, like no one was listening. I said multiple times that the chapter posted was not done and needed revising, but I did act immaturely and I apologize for that. Thank you for the input. Is there anything you can suggest that may help me pull together my poems and/or chapter to make them better? I would really appreciate it if you could help me.