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Rigel · Posted 08-12-2012, 06:44 AM

It's charming. A lot of repetition that I'm betting was just the result of sleep deprivation and lack of full proof reading. It would make an interesting legend, if expanded, for use within another story.

Overall, I like it.

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It's charming. A lot of repetition that I'm betting was just the result of sleep deprivation and lack of full proof reading. It would make an interesting legend, if expanded, for use within another story. Overall, I like it. 　　　　 Rigel's a star. You can find me on: ficpress + tumblr + last.fm ✦ GROUP FOR WRITERS & BOOKWORMS
	Posted 08-12-2012, 06:44 AM