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Trakadon
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The girl and the flower
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I stayed up late to write this. Not sure why this story was stuck in my head but I'll post the ROUGH draft here. I'd like to know what you guys think. But I remind you this was written while sleep deprived so be gentle XD
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There once lived a girl who was praised for her great beauty. All the villagers praised her and gave her extravagant gifts. As time went by she became more beautiful and equally selfish. When the girl came of age the tale of her beauty had stretched far and wide and men came from distant lands to ask for her hand. "Marry me and I will give you that you desire!" They all proclaimed. But the girl only turned her nose up at them. One day will out for a stroll the girl saw a man selling flowers. "Give me all your flowers" she proclaimed, but the man simply shook his head. "Aren't I beautiful? Don't you want to give them to me?" she said. But the man just simply shook his head. "Why?" the girl asked. Her beauty was without equal and no man had ever refused her before. "Deep within the flower fields lies a rose of such blissful beauty that your own beauty pales in comparison." The man said. Hurt and angry by the man's words the girl ran off to find this flower. For hours she searched the flower field until she found the flower. Shocked by the beauty of the flowers red petals the girl reached for the flower. "I shall pluck you from this world so no one will see your face." The girl said, and as she grasped the stem of the flower she heard a whisper. "I shall prick you so you shall never forget my face." The flower said. The girl retracted her hand in pain as a red blood droplet fell to the ground and where her blood fell a red rose soon bloomed and just as vibrant as the one before it. As the girl fled the field more rose bloomed for each drop of blood and soon the field was filled with beautiful roses of red. The tale of the girl's beauty soon faded from the minds and lips of the people.
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Last edited by Trakadon; 08-12-2012 at
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Posted 08-12-2012, 06:26 AM