[Gallagher]

Weeell, this is kind of my section, and you've made nice in some of the places I normally lurk in.


As for targeting a certain audience, I'd like to think that they can appreciate the finer points of writing and flow, they just don't always have the means to explain that that's part of what makes them enjoy it. Personally, I still have several books I enjoyed when I was even younger than that, and they did, in fact, have that variety. Most of what I see with that sort of style are written by that age group for that age group and, more often than not, they just don't have the refined abilities yet.