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Natsunaine
Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
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I like the poem but im not sure what it is but i feel like it could be better. To be honest im not a good critic thats more galla, and sheol's territory XD
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"
"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"
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"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
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Posted 08-11-2012, 09:20 PM
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