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Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:16 AM

Fifth verse seemed like it didn't have enough syllables, and the last verse didn't exactly rhyme, but I only noticed because everything else flowed so well.

		#9576	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
Fifth verse seemed like it didn't have enough syllables, and the last verse didn't exactly rhyme, but I only noticed because everything else flowed so well. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:16 AM