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Natsunaine · Posted 08-06-2012, 08:53 AM

I agree with the grammar thing, Another thing that really doesn't matter but makes it easier to read you might wanna divide it into paragraphs or whatever its also makes it more eye appealing other than that i like the lyrics you should def keep it up malinko :)

Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker			#3
	I agree with the grammar thing, Another thing that really doesn't matter but makes it easier to read you might wanna divide it into paragraphs or whatever its also makes it more eye appealing other than that i like the lyrics you should def keep it up malinko :) "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
		Posted 08-06-2012, 08:53 AM