[Asami]

That was very interesting, though the various grammatical and spelling errors got to me. You might want to go through it and fix it all up. Remember which there, their or they're to use and that it isn't dieing its dying. When taking a word that ends with e you generally take off the e. So with words you have used like living remove the e. And from what I have seen everytime you spell because you swap the a and u.


Also I take this is a rap? Because of what you stated at the beginning so maybe you'll be able to record it for us to listen to. Because sometimes the music makes it better and easier to understand.

Keep writing though ^^