[Gallagher]

... I've been putting this off for a while.

First off, I have to say that I have a hard time imagining the music that might go with these, and without knowing the sound, I really can't say at all how it stands musically.

From a writing perspective, however...

They all seem fairly cookie-cutter. The themes, rhymes, and visuals are all pretty common and overdone. There's nothing all that memorable about them at this point. I know that for the songs that I listen to, that's a huge downer. Unless you can get the feeling just right with the music and vocals, it will be easy to hear no feeling behind the words, and feeling is the most important thing in music.

I know for a fact, however, that many songs and types of music DO do well even without the most amazing lyrics. If you're looking to be deep... sorry, you're just not hitting it. If you're looking to be catchy or 'stuck in your head', though, you certainly still have a chance with these.