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Espy
Wanderer
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The little bit of hanyu made me smile. The (your) left eye needs to be moved left a bit. Neck needs to be thicker; the cheeks shouldn't be straight like that. They should be curved out. Hair's not too shabby.
STONEWALL WAS A RIOT
Step in front of a runaway train
____Just to feel alive again
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Pushing forward through the night_____
Aching chest and blurry sight
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Posted 07-17-2012, 03:22 AM
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