[mythological irony]

Thanks for the comments! ^ ^

Okay, I will definitely drop the "as if" part of the sentence.

Establishing settings has always been one of my weak points in writing. I overlook it a lot. I will work on that, though. XD

And I don't usually switch perspectives like that, but I couldn't find a way around it given that Micah taken the picture out of the trash was important to the story. Though a scene break should probably work.

Again, thank you! XD