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It's a light shift. The piece is written from Elijah's point of view. When he leaves the room, the narrative should have followed him, but it sticks around to watch Micah. It's not a big problem, and easily fixed with a scene break to indicate the change, but it doesn't need it that much. It's not garish, like going from first person to third would be.
Old Posted 05-18-2012, 04:51 PM Reply With Quote