[Fenris]

Over all it looks good nightmare, I am a little excited to see stuff from you coming out because I know Illusions keeps trying to get us to hire you, though we can't til you are 18 or older.
But I do see a few problems with the website that may not be your fault but im not sure. The Free trial/member pass things, are very hard to read. As is the white text on the black right below the header. The header also took me a minute to read, which on those its mainly because the background 'noise' on the images. I am not sure how I feel about the side way labels, they are actually the hardest thing to read. On the bottom, you could put all that information into one column rather than splitting it. I would put the address etc on top and then the copyright and your name below that but it could be done either way.

I on the other hand really like the over all set up of the site, but I would switch the information text and trial/member passes. The scroll bar being in the middle looks very awkward.