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Mind Critiquing My Website?
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Pinfeathers
Barrel of Monkeys
The set up is very nice. The link's are all easily accessible. I'd say thus far you have a nice looking site in the works.
One thing I would suggest is going over each page of the site thoroughly, looking for typo's. Maybe have a friend double check it as well. I only began reading the "About Us" section when I found a small error:
"Our membership packages are flexible so you can
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up for a shorter term and not be locked into a long-term commitment."
I'd also suggest you read through the site aloud so you can hear how professional or otherwise the structure sounds. (You're going for a professional tone, yes?)
Those are the only suggestions I really have. The site itself looks nice~ Thus far, it seems quite well done. :)
Posted 05-10-2012, 09:26 PM