[Xun]

If this is a poem or some kind of form of free-write, I am impressed with the message you give.

If this is actually coming from your heart, let me first critique with some words of my own:

This is the same shit people are complaining about all over the world, so what makes you think your words will be heard differently than other people? What is making you stop from gaining what you desire if you despise the world?

Nothing... no one... is stopping you.

The fact that people judge you-- who are they to judge? Who died and made them kings and queens? Then again, are you not guilty yourself to making assumptions of what others think?

Who are you to trust in if you cannot trust God with your life? Yourself? No, oh dear no. You can't even trust yourself because you know yourself very well-- too well to the point where you know you can and can't do things. You keep yourself down because you know what you like and dislike. If you can't trust yourself, who can you trust in the end?

Forget about the world-- forget about the people in it. If you have lost all faith in humanity, then forget about humanity. Don't kill yourself over it, however. Instead, hold your head up high in pride and show the world who you truly are because the world cannot substitute the same uniqueness you possess. The world cannot replace you. Your words are your own and no one can ever mimic such a thing.

Be yourself. Don't let anyone put you down. Not even yourself.



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But like I said, if this is part of your writing, I love it! '^'