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Hex · Posted 04-12-2012, 02:21 PM

Oh thank you! I think you may be right about that line, but I am always scared tha the visualization of what happens may be lost when I shorten lines up like that. I worry a lot haha!

I love short lines like that in poetry. I have a few poems that have repeated lines. but they always have some purpose. I like thinking of it as a heartbeat that is nifty!

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	Oh thank you! I think you may be right about that line, but I am always scared tha the visualization of what happens may be lost when I shorten lines up like that. I worry a lot haha! I love short lines like that in poetry. I have a few poems that have repeated lines. but they always have some purpose. I like thinking of it as a heartbeat that is nifty! Formerly known as MandaChaos. I am back and so happy to be here. “The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.” Mahatma Gandhi
		Posted 04-12-2012, 02:21 PM