[Rakura Lynn]

The Tech on the Arm's and legs,look too flat, and the joints look like they wont bend, I suggest adding more ear details around the elbows or make a space where his scrawny elbow shows, same for the knee. He looks like some one is pulling his hair from behind, have him lean with the sword more and he won't look like some one gave him a wedgie or put ice down his back.