[Espy]

Let there be...critique! It'd've been easier if I'd redlined it, but....yeah.

Uh. I'm gonna start with...her boobs. They look a tad bit strange, perhaps because for her small statue and slight frame, they seem to be a bit bit. That might also be in part because her head's proportionally large.

Also...hm. The neck's too thin, and just a bit short.

Don't forgot that there are tendons that attach your arms to your torso, ahaha. Oinari right now looks like she's got no actual armpit >.> Elbows are about mid-waist; fingertips go a bit past the crotch.

Even for an acrobat...that right (our left...?) leg is angled a bit oddly.