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Red Calypso
Woo, Graduated High School
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Is this just the first chapter? I take it the strange woman is Kayla? It could be interesting, if you avoid the Mary Sue trap. I would recommend getting a beta, to clean up the spelling.
Gall's Cheiri
Questing for Pretties!
art by Gallagher
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Posted 04-01-2012, 11:09 PM
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