Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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#163
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I seem to have found the solution. All thanks to your unwavering faith in me. ;)
Is meant to be read in alphabetical order by columns, but you can always try it other ways too. :p
I'm strongly considering cutting the last W stanza, as I think the V stanza ends it much better.
Edit: I see errors already. X__X Oh, well, spotted them in time for class at least.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 02-18-2012, 08:08 PM
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