[Pinkie]

Oh my...Sorry I was reading your novel of a post hehe and pinkie really likes it. To me the plot is something different yet all to familular at the same time. As for a storie line I got this when I read it.

The world was a different place than what I remember. The soft greens of the grass are harsh and brown, leaving nothing to the minds eye to capture but death. My name is Alice and I am the last of my kind. Over ridden by humans this world is dying by the toxic touch they bring with them. I feel as though I have a duty to this land. My mother earth weeps for what she had, and I thought being a captive was bad enough. To endure such pain for a land lost was all I thought about until the day I was no longer alone in that cell.

Thats all I thought of from that post as far as a storie line goes. Though I really like whats there so far! What do you think?