Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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I think Simply Put is strong, but it almost feels like it's not reaching it's potential. Don't get me wrong, I like it as is, but I think it could be even better. Pretty evocative, though.
The Free I think is my favorite poem of yours so far. Pacing, rhyming, content, everything just works.
And Waste takes a while to get going, but the mood becomes almost all-encompassing by the end. The fragmented nature near the end only adds to the effect, I feel.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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Posted 01-26-2012, 08:39 PM
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