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Arsis_von_Neaera Arsis_von_Neaera is offline
THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... *gurgle*
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I caught that this wasn't you. I was assuming that in writing this, much like I do, you were expressing an overly emphasized version of your own thoughts. Which, as you stated, you kind of were. I get it though. Though its similar, its not you. I think its a very interesting, well written perspective. I highly doubt that any teenage angry, angst ridden, sociopath goth girls could have possibly written this, though. Which is why I initially took this to be you. I know a number of goth individuals who, although clever, were never quite this well thought out. It's almost too accurate kind of deal. I suppose that's part of the satire, though I thought the comedy of this was just to be over the top. Not necessarily well written and thought out. I think the clever part is you, the rest is some nonsensical babbling diatribe you might have been "privy" to listen to at some point in life; whether that be self imposed or not.

Right, that's cyclical thinking. You wrote it so clever that its too clever to be considered clever. Which makes you look clever which is why you wrote it too clever to be considered clever... I'm totally rambling at this point, I really hope that didn't make sense.
Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition.

"Maybe she was born with it..."
Old Posted 01-26-2012, 01:44 PM Reply With Quote