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Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-24-2012, 02:01 PM

I agree with Quiet, again. Poetry will often write itself, so long as you let it. Just a though, poetry that writes itself has a tendency to leave a trail of bread crumbs leading to whence it came. It's a great way to express yourself. As I said before, this poem is kind of revealing, it's speaking about a very general plight that is very specific to you, but resembles the human condition. A lot of your poetry does this. It's a common theme I've noticed with you. It's like you've decided to claim the wait of the world as your own so that you can properly share it with others.

Cool. Just an opinion though.

		#98	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
I agree with Quiet, again. Poetry will often write itself, so long as you let it. Just a though, poetry that writes itself has a tendency to leave a trail of bread crumbs leading to whence it came. It's a great way to express yourself. As I said before, this poem is kind of revealing, it's speaking about a very general plight that is very specific to you, but resembles the human condition. A lot of your poetry does this. It's a common theme I've noticed with you. It's like you've decided to claim the wait of the world as your own so that you can properly share it with others. Cool. Just an opinion though. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-24-2012, 02:01 PM