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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Well, thank you both for your comments, some excellent food for thought. I'm going to bring it into class tomorrow to see what my professor thinks, though I'm anticipating a lot of "huh?"'s from my classmates.

In truth, I'm not even really sure where this came from. I had the basic idea in mind, but it really sort of wrote itself. I'm surprised at how well it came out.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 01-23-2012, 11:51 PM Reply With Quote