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Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-23-2012, 11:08 PM

I agree with Quiet. This can show up in many ways to one perception. It kind of divides your thought process for you. I enjoyed reading this in the order that the Tarot's Fool supposedly journeys the Tree of Life. I liked your Daath. I read that part wrong the first time. I thought it said "I am only what I am - Totally". When I realized it said totality, it changed the whole poem for me.

Interesting. These sound like questions that need answers. I think this is pretty phenomenal, actually. A little revealing, but a very interesting way of writing.

		#94	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
I agree with Quiet. This can show up in many ways to one perception. It kind of divides your thought process for you. I enjoyed reading this in the order that the Tarot's Fool supposedly journeys the Tree of Life. I liked your Daath. I read that part wrong the first time. I thought it said "I am only what I am - Totally". When I realized it said totality, it changed the whole poem for me. Interesting. These sound like questions that need answers. I think this is pretty phenomenal, actually. A little revealing, but a very interesting way of writing. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-23-2012, 11:08 PM