[Quiet Man Cometh]

This is interesting. I find myself less focused on what lines are actually saying though, as much as I am on moving the lines around and re-ordering the groupings into new poems.

I read the whole thing first, left to right and down as the lines fell normally, as though there was no form. I found I liked it better reading it as though each cluster of aligned lines was a poem or stanza by itself, and it reads like three poems if one looks at the left justified stanzas, the right justified, and the middle "trunk" of the tree.

One thing though, the bottom portion, the "root" of the tree I suppose, feels like an add on to me, more like an after thought. It feels like one of those questions that is there to no real purpose. That's my only criticism really. Otherwise, I like it. :)