[Arsis_von_Neaera]

Cool :D

This is more just my opinion, but... the second unnamed. I really like this one as well. There's two angels that can be taken from it, but really the completed image of the poem remains the same. It's describing fake people, AND its describing falseness. Not just describing the culprit, but describing the crime... Not just the victim, but also the wound. And it also can be read from either of those perspectives. It both accuses and victimizes the "individual" your describing.

It feels kind of like an hourglass. Not so much completed circles as it is two things at once. Ever seen that painting of the old woman and young woman, where really its just the perspective that you take of it? This poem has done that. It can be taken personally, or it can be seen suggestively and general.

I like that. It's awesome. Intended or not. Killing two birds with one stone, even if they don't deserve to die, is a feat.