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Forum: Art & Writing 12-07-2013, 02:31 AM
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I struggled with "olive skin" for the longest...

I struggled with "olive skin" for the longest time ever. I think it's supposed to be like...tan? From what I remember, "olive" is referring to the gold-ness that some olives can have (not all olives...
Forum: Art & Writing 11-15-2013, 09:37 PM
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Posted By Espy
Currently trying to fix that. My writing still...

Currently trying to fix that. My writing still sort of a mess, though.

And yeah, 8 bothers me and is a thing I've been messing with for my characters.

10. Short choppy sentences. Yes, I get...
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