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Mekatra 11-07-2019 10:52 PM

Creation myth feedback?
 
So I am writing the creation myth for the world I have made for my tabletop group. Anyone mind giving it a readthrough and letting me know what you think? This is only first draft so grammar and such is less my concern than if it makes sense and if you think it is interesting or not. <3



I still have to come up with a name for the "Great Energy" and fiddle around with the wording in several places, but concept-wise do you think it is sound? Does it seem too similar to any other creation stories you have heard?


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