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Mizeria 06-05-2014 03:23 AM

I would like some Avi Help
 
http://i.imgur.com/MyCYZro.png

I would like some opinions.
Please feel free to rate and/or give advice.


Espy 06-05-2014 03:28 AM

Can't quite figure out what you were going for, unfortunately. Might just be too tired.

Mizeria 06-05-2014 03:29 AM

something different
It just feels off to me.
(I am also to tired.)

Tiva 06-05-2014 03:41 AM

take out the second arm of vines only use the one. Also earth spirit has vines.

Mizeria 06-05-2014 03:42 AM

leave the side with the flower, or the side without?

Tiva 06-05-2014 03:47 AM

with the flower, the other green just looks off.. cause the floaty in space

Umaeril 06-05-2014 11:10 AM

Wow, what an original creation! I do not know what I would do with that. I am not good at abstractions. But I do agree with Tiva, however, I think both green vines should come off unless you put some of that green elsewhere. Adding some green, idk...boy I might try those lanterns behind everything and see if that added anything good to the mix, hard to tell. Item is called Xinnian. My gut tells me it would be too much and not quite the right color.

Ok how about taking off the vines and leaving it like that? Or you could see if Iounn could decorate the cross with the green head vine. Or maybe you could add the green leaves from Call of Glory and see if they look ok in the background behind everything. If there is anything that might expand the object at the top into that black, that might help.

Mizeria 06-05-2014 09:55 PM

Xinnian is the wrong color. I had tried that last night myself xD

The vine just seemed to ascent the brown nicely. hm
I'll take off some items and just save the wing part so we can look at it that way to see what y'all think then.

http://i.imgur.com/zvbuI54.png

Poggio 06-05-2014 11:01 PM

I really like the abstraction in the first one and feels odd with out the background. I'd take the glow out and try for the glow y flowers instead.

Mizeria 06-05-2014 11:05 PM

the glow from the timelord?

Poggio 06-05-2014 11:40 PM

yeah try the nox rig. It may blend better then having a glow directly under it.

Mizeria 06-05-2014 11:47 PM

it doesn't give the same effect.
I wanted the effect of it being 'summoned', for lack of better word, through the clock.

Poggio 06-05-2014 11:55 PM

hmm, the magic circle in the love yearly?

Mizeria 06-06-2014 12:11 AM

hmm... that doesn't look right either v.v

Espy 06-06-2014 12:28 AM

What about the silver ring from Nocturnalis Harvest?


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